Writing Exam 1

A Discovery Story

     Sometimes we underestimate the value and the meaning of "FAMILY", and suddenly, things around us detract our attention to the truly important things in life, making us give the ones we love, only the tiny part of our week that we got left, putting them in last. The saddest part is when we realize that we were wrong, but the time is over, and it´s too late, we can't go back in time.

     I started to work at age of 17, and since then, I´ve never stop working. I was feeling blessed for having a job that really made me happy, I truly enjoyed. Then I had the opportunity to collaborate in Musical Theater,  that became my second passion, and quickly mi life was changed, and my week was a full time schedule with no "family weekends" or vacations.

     I have to admit that I love what I do, and it is why it was so difficult for me to wisely sort my priorities. So, my family became my last priority, and music, my work, theater, friends and dreams were my everything. Now, I know we can have time for both worlds, and WE HAVE TO.

     One day my grandma got sick; that kind of sickness that you can´t control, and there is no turning back. She was always (before I started to perform and worked in my "dreamed job") beside me and my cousins; she was the lovely kind of grandma that you see in movies, but also had an adventurous and fun side too. Once, in summer vacations, She took us all the grandchildren (we were 11 teens then, I still don't know how she dared to takes us all :D) to our first plane travel to Mexico City, and because of her I discovered Musical Theater in that travel. I remember how She loved it, so, one day she spent some of her savings in Theater tickets for all of us. It was my first play ever! It was amazing! I still got the feelings of that day, and how I was watching the show and thinking: "WOW! I want to do that, I need to do it!" and how my heart was beating with the music trough all the musical numbers. I think I owe her many things that I´m living right now (things that will be always dedicate to her)

     So, I was there, sitting at the hospital room, looking at the most caring and bravest woman, lying in bed, stopped because of a stroke. I knew she was awake just because the noise of the tubes that were connected to her throat, and the little "involuntary moves" that she made sometimes with her eyes, or her hands. In that moment I was thinking: Why didn't I spent more time with her?  Why did I miss all the special days? Why did I never said: "No, I cant, I have made plans already with my family"? All these questions came to me like cold water, but it was late.

     That night, back in my home, I was feeling so blue, and then came to me this need of doing something to her, tell her somehow that I have always loved her, and always will. Say thanks to her, and let her know everything would be fine in the end; so I decided to write and record a song for her, just changing the lyrics of an existing one, using a karaoke track and my laptop to do it (not a professional recording, just a gift I wanted to do quickly before she was gone) And I did.

     So, in the next afternoon, when my turn of watching over her came, I carefully put my earphones in her ears, and said to her: "There is something I want you to listen Grandma, I wrote a song for you." I held her motionless hand, and trying to holding back my tears, heard the song with her, where I was saying something like "Even if I couldn't see you, or touch you, I will still feel you. Don't be afraid. I know you can hear me even though doctors say no, and I know you will always be here with me. I can feel it! and I will always love you"  TU ESTAS AQUÍ - Song For my Grandma

     Doctors had told us before, She couldn't hear us, or understand anything, because her brain was no longer working, they called "brain death", but despite what they said about her condition, I know she was listening to my song, I truly believe that she was there with me, and she understood every word.

     Two days later, she passed away, and even when it was a hard time, we felt peace. She was already resting without any fear or pain, and her face was reflecting that peace that I'm sure she is already enjoying.

     Now, almost 5 years later, the songs still gives me chills, but It's one of my favorites because what it means; and I feel blessed to have had a Grandmother like her, for all that she taught me, for the music, something that we shared; and all the love she gave us. I feel so lucky and grateful to have been her granddaughter, and finally I'm glad that her memory always remembers me the truly important things in life.

Luisa Emilia Oliveros

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EXERCISES A + B

"When I was 17, I wanted to go to college, but I have not finished high school. I was needing one more credit, so I decided to take art history at night school. It was great. (Looking back,) I have always liked art - even before I took that course. (Anyway, getting back to my story, ) the teacher was pretty cool. She played classical music in class. (When i think about it, ) I guess that´s when I learned to love Mozart. (So anyway) she asked us to write an essay on a famous artist, so I chose Vincent van Gogh. I didn´t start my essay until the night before it was due because I was working at my uncle´s store all semester. I sat down to write, but I had left all my art books at work. I only had a book of van Gogh´s letters to his brother, Theo. Also, I had forgotten to buy paper. So for my essay, I wrote letters from Theo to Vinvent on my mother´s fancy writing paper! My teacher loved it. (It´s no wonder that ) I leave things till the last minute. It often works out!"

EXERCISE C

Was it fair that the writer got a good grade? I think it is, because, even when he let the homework for the last minute, he used his creativity to solve the problems and did a good job at the end.
Is it OK to leave things to the last minute? No, it´s not okey, because you have to work trough a lot of pression and stress, and also you could be facing problems that you couldn´t resolve in the last minute, so, it´s allways a better idea to be organized and do things in time.

Is it good to work and study? Maybe it is not the best idea, because you are not focused in just one thing (study for example) and it takes you time that you need for homeworks, but some times it´s something that you HAVE TO. 

HIGLIGHTS

Mily ( 29 years old - College Student - Mexico)

HIGHLIGHTS

I have been so much lucky until now and I feel so grateful about it because I´ve enjoyed a lot of opportunities in the artistic field, something that´s very important in mi life, and it´s not only because of being there and being part of it, but also because I´ve learned so much about myself, about discipline, hard work and how to work as a team.

I went 3 consecutive summers to ARTESTUDIO in Mexico City, an scenic arts school, to prepare myself. I took basic dance training like jazz, ballet, and tap; vocal training, cast auditions, acting skills and then we present a final show with several musical numbers. I was living with 7 friends, all of them actors or singers from Mexicali, and it was the first time for me, living without my parents, so, it was so much fun.  Also I went to the theater with my friends several times to see professional plays.

In that moment of my life, the Musical Theater was my life, and since then i'm in love of it; so from 2007 to begins of 2015 I've worked in many local plays here in Mexicali, getting involved not only in the cast, but sometimes doing the vocal direction, and also  being part of coordination and production team.

FW: Assignment

 

 

Please do Exercises A, B, and C in a reply to this post. 

Ms. Julia Garza

 

Everyday work on building your 

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